Sick Sentence's

Here are the sick sentences. The ball came towards Richie. He jumped into the air. He held out his hands. He was excited. It was up to him.

Here are mine.
The ball hurled in the air like a rocket on fire towards him. Shooting in the air like he had springs in his feet Richie jumped into the air. Stretching his hands to his full potential he just caught the ball by his finger tips. As adrenaline filled his body he was on fire. The pressure was on as he was thrilled as it was up to him.