Wednesday 21 August 2019

Show Not Tell.

Kade was shocked.
Kade jaw drooped as his faced turned pale.
Tommy was excited.
Tommy eyes bulged open as he  looked like he was going to jump over the moon.
Bob felt sad.
Bob was swimming in his own tears.
Garry was angry.
Slowly changing Garry's face turned white to red as rage consumed him.

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